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The Waiting Waters

Olivier Plante

i

I was lost for a moment

Standing by the waiting waters,

Gazing to the distant horizon.

Was what I saw real?

Or a trick of the mind.

A hallucination.

The setting sun

Cast a crimson road

On the surface

Of the gently rolling waves.

A reflection red as blood.

An indication of a way.

It beckoned me.

 

ii

"No point in trying."

said Cynicism loudly.

He stood on my right

Which he always thought he was.

"There's a way to know,"

said Hope quietly.

He stood to my left

To remind me he was

Close to my heart

And the stronger of the two.

"How long will it take?"

I asked.

"Too long,"

said Cynicism.

"I don't know."

said Hope.

"How do I get across?"

I asked.

"You can't swim. You'll drown."

said Cynicism.

"We'll build a raft."

said Hope.

"Out of what?"

mocked Cynicism.

"You don't have the materials."

"A Gardener planted seeds,"

said Hope.

“They are your passions and dreams.

Tended patiently,

They've flourished into trees.

The same Gardener

Has been growing fruit.

One of the vines,

Trust, will tie the branches

Together and you

Will have your raft."

"Trust can break.

Your dreams will drift away,"

demanded Cynicism.

"The One who planted the fruit

Knew what He was doing,"

said Hope.

"The vines will hold

The raft together."

"I'm afraid to try,"

I said.

"I don't know if I'll get there."

"You may end up somewhere

Different than expected.

But you will get there

Should you cross

The waiting waters,"

said Hope.

"Or you'll sink along the way,"

suggested Cynicism.

"Only if the vines are cut,"

said Hope.

 

iii

Cynicism waited nearby

As Hope and I

Built my raft of dreams.

Trust held each dream fast.

 

iv

"It's time to get to

Where you're going,"

said Hope.

"Or likely drown

along the way,"

replied Cynicism.

"It's not too late.

Walk away from the raft.

Keep your feet on dry land.

Stay where you've always been.

Be here.

Be safe."

"I'm afraid.

I said.

"But I must go.

You are not coming

With me this time,

Cynicism."

He backed away, glaring.

 

v

I boarded my raft of dreams.

Hope pushed me out

Onto the waiting waters,

And leapt up beside me.

He took my hand.

"You'll get where you're going."

 

vi

Descending into the dark,

The sun's bloody red trail was

Replaced by a pure, white path.

The full moon

Cast a bright road

On the gently rolling waves.

The golden sun

Sacrificed itself

For the moon

To reflect its light.

"The stars are fickle and distant,

Too far to be grasped.

Follow the light of the moon

When the sun cannot be seen,"

said Hope.

The night sky

Was alive with wonder and light

That my eyes swallowed,

And my soul was fed.

 

vii

Not every night

Was as beautiful.

Nor the path

As obvious and apparent.

The moon was on a cycle

And not always bright and full.

Often clouds shrouded

The lights of the sky.

Sometimes I couldn't see.

But I could feel

Hope always to my left.

The waiting waters

Continued to carry me.

 

viii

Hope, my true companion,

Was ever present.

But I found myself

Thinking of the friend

I left behind,

Cynicism.

I even missed him

And wondered

Whether he was right.

Would my raft come apart?

Would I drown

In the waiting waters?

 

ix

The nights were darker

More often than not.

And the clouds

Carried over into day.

With the lacking sun,

I felt more distant

From my companion, Hope.

I felt as if...

I was losing him.

I began to complain.

"How great is the distance

I must travel across

These cursed waters?

How much longer

Must I ride this raft

With no end in sight?"

"I don't know,"

said Hope.

"But stay on the raft.

The vines will hold fast.

You'll get where you're going

On the waiting waters."

Hope always said the same.

He was aggravating

And impossible to argue with.

No amount of logic

Could dissuade

His steadfast countenance.

He was constant

As the current below us,

Carrying me just as much

As the waiting waters.

But I couldn't see

What Hope could.

And I didn't believe

The raft was able;

No branches strong enough

Nor the vines worthy.

I thought of Cynicism often

And deemed his cowardice

To be wisdom.

 

x

My mind drifted

As my raft of dreams did

On the waiting waters.

My words shifted

To sound more and more

Like my old friend,

Cynicism.

His echoes stretched

Across the distance.

They only grew louder

Instead of fading away.

Hope never raised his voice

Or changed his words.

 

xi

Then came the storm.

My stomach

Rose and fell

With the waves

Of the waiting waters.

The wind threatened

To pull me from my raft

But Hope held me steady

With his strong hand.

The rain whipped

Into my face

And blinded my eyes.

"We're not going to make it!"

I cried out in fear.

"Stay on the raft.

The vines will hold fast.

You'll get where you're going

On the waiting waters."

Even with the noise

Of the raging storm

And thrashing waves

I could still hear Hope

Though he did not

Raise his voice.

But rather than

Bringing comfort

His words repeated,

Cycling in my head,

Swirling like the water.

And when I swallowed them

They tasted bitter.

Though it was his hand

Keeping me from

Slipping off the raft,

His strength keeping me

From being dragged under,

The desire to shrug

His grip on my shoulder

Grew and grew and grew

To match the ferocity

Of the storm around me.

 

xii

We crested the top of

The biggest wave yet.

For a moment

The world slowed

And it felt as if we were

Perched on the edge

Of a precipice.

"Look,"

said Hope.

I tried to open my eyes.

But the wind and rain

Still stung

And I squeezed them shut.

"Look,"

said Hope again.

"The sun."

For a moment

I felt the warmth.

And then

The wave collapsed

And we were

Back in the throws

Of the storm,

At the mercy

Of the waiting waters.

 

 

xiii

The echoes of

Cynicism's voice

And cautious words

Seemed less distant.

A familiar presence

Crept up beside me.

And this time,

Despite the stinging,

I forced my eyes open.

I saw a vessel

Towering over us.

It breached the waves

With apparent ease.

"I've come to rescue

You, my friend."

I saw Cynicism

Standing at the helm.

"Abandon Hope

As you abandoned me!

Cut the vines

And you will be free!"

He yelled above the storm.

I saw him draw a blade

From his side

And with a powerful arm

He threw it

Across the distance

Between us.

On instinct

My hand rose

And I felt it

Close around the hilt.

It was a familiar blade.

It was called

disappointment.

 

xiv

With no

Further instruction

I knew

What I must do.

I slid the blade

Between the vines

And the raft.

But Hope's touch

Gave me pause.

In that moment

I had a choice.

 

xv

The wind howled.

The rain pelted.

The waves battered.

The storm would not ease.

"Just wait,"

Hope said.

I loosened my grip

On disappointment.

I pondered passing

The blade to Hope.

"You are not safe!"

Yelled Cynicism.

"Climb into my ship.

It's a haven from pain.

Cut the vines!

Kill Hope!

Then drop the sword

Into the waiting waters.

You won't need it

After it's done this work."

"Just wait,"

said Hope.

I gave up on Hope.

 

xvi

Indifference

Took over

And I shrugged

Hope's hand

From my shoulder.

I cut the vines of trust

With the blade

Of disappointment

And I plunged it

Into Hope's chest.

I felt satisfaction

That I could

Escape the waiting waters.

That I could

Live without disappointment.

That I could

Be free from Hope's cruel words.

My raft of dreams

Began to separate.

I felt a hand grip

My collar

And snatch me

Up and away from

The waiting waters.

 

xvii

Cynicism turned

The ship around.

As Hope

And my raft of dreams

Slipped from view,

They slipped

From my mind.

"Let's go back

To where you were,"

Said Cynicism.

 

xviii

It took little time

To get back to

Where I was.

Much less than

I had spent

On the waiting waters.

Cynicism drove

The ship ashore.

He wasted no time

In disembarking.

My feet found

The sandy coastline

And I spotted Cynicism

Carrying a torch

And an armful

Of large branches.

He climbed back

Into the ship.

I saw smoke

Drifting into the sky.

Cynicism

Stood beside me.

We watched

The vessel burn

To the ground.

“You won’t be

Needing it,”

Smiled Cynicism.

“You’re where

You’ve always been.

You’re where you’re

Meant to be

With no Hope.

And no disappointment.”

 

xix

I stood on the shoreline

Gazing out across

The waiting waters

Unfeeling to their beckoning.

A glint in the sand

Caught my attention.

I stooped and dusted

The sand aside.

Tears sprang to my eyes.

It was disappointment.

Cynicism had lied.

I thought the blade

Would be gone forever

When Hope had died.

But now I saw it

Sharp as ever.

Washed ashore

To the place I was before.

And I felt it’s cold steel

In my hand.

With shame and sorrow

I finally realized

The atrocity I had committed.

I had betrayed Hope.

I called my friend, enemy

And my enemy, friend.

I thought I had

Grasped the handle

As I picked up the sword

But it was the blade.

Disappointment cut deep.

And I bled.

Cynicism ignored

The gash on my hand.

I missed Hope.

But I had killed him.

 

xx

Disappointment

Was an ever-present weight.

It was attached

To my belt

Tucked into a sheath

So I could pretend

It wasn’t sharp.

“This is where

You were before.

This is where

You’ll always be.

This is where

You’re meant to be.”

Cynicism told me often.

I would return

To the shore

Only to remember

How I’d failed before

Trying to cross

The waiting waters.

And this time

There was no Hope

To help me.

This was where

I’d always be.

 

xxi

Something felt different

That moonlit night.

Silver beams

Glanced and danced

On the surface

Of the waiting waters.

My hand firmly gripped

The handle

Of disappointment.

I longed

To be out on the waves

Of the waiting waters.

Their uncertain tide

Was a welcome beckoning.

I knew them to be better than

Where I was,

Where I would always be.

But I knew I would sink

With no true friend

And no steady raft.

 

xxii

I was lost for a moment

Standing by the waiting waters,

Gazing to the distant horizon.

Was what I saw real?

Or a trick of the mind.

A hallucination.

Rising from the water

Was a familiar figure

Vines were wrapped around

His arms and waist,

Tied to a mass

Of floating branches.

Hope had returned.

And with him he brought

My raft of shattered dreams.

He dragged it ashore

With the vines of trust I had cut.

Hope dropped them at my feet.

I couldn’t meet his gaze

But scanned his chest

For evidence of my

Awful handiwork.

To see the scars

Of disappointment

I had tried to kill him with.

As I studied his wounds,

Hope reached out his hand

And touched my chest.

I watched in horror

As the scars marring his skin

Faded and a pain

Grew within my heart.

Hope’s scars

Disappeared entirely

And he pulled back his hand.

Mine replaced his

As I grasped

At the pain.

I felt the wet of blood

And a maze of wounds.

Hope stooped and picked up

The vines of trust.

He held them out to me,

And waited patiently.

I hesitated…

But without really knowing why,

I let go of my chest

And grasped the vines.

The pain subsided.

I breathed in deeply.

“How long will it take?”

I asked.

“I don’t know,”

Hope said.

“But you’ll get where you’re going

Should you cross the waiting waters.”

 

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